Kira-x Edinburgh

[Stickyfinger3913]

Punt was before Xmas in Edinburgh an air bb near the Museum of Scotland parking cost a fortune.Had the urge had been let down seen her profile normally try to stay away from eastern European woman but seen her pictures and at 70 per half hour thought why not. Coms were good given flat number and door entry codes bloody nightmare to find met a door with a very attractive fit lady.Thought she my be older than the stated 29 but obviously looks after herself. Big false blobs but not the worst job I've seen. On to bed kissing and feeling then on to some good owo had to stop her as I was wanting a ride. She jumped on top cow girl then reverse nice view of her toned ass. Came was cleaned up she was chatty and funny she lives down south but was touring. All in all not a bad half hour.
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[nike]

FFS,  that was hard reading.

[Name Not Found]

FFS,  that was hard reading.

My head hurts trying to make sense of it. Seems to be the OP's unique style though. As they say, any review is better than no review 

[CrespinWolfe]

I’ve got a headache too after trying to read it. A few more full stops please OP, at the relevant places. Other than that, thank you for the review.

[auldie63]

God bless the apostrophe,,,,,,,

[Stickyfinger3913]

Sorry thought this was a punting blog not A level English !

[zag69]

Steady on you rotten bastards, don't you know English isn't his first language?   

[Name Not Found]

Steady on you rotten bastards, don't you know English isn't his first language? 

Don't other languages have punctuation then? 

[Stickyfinger3913]

Some people need to get out more.

[Name Not Found]

Some people need to get out more.

Grammar classes may be available at your local college. How about that for a day out ? 

[Stickyfinger3913]

Suspended due to Covid.

[nike]

 

Punt was before Xmas in Edinburgh, an air Bnb, near the Museum of Scotland. Parking cost a fortune.
Had the urge, had been let down before. s
Seen her profile, normally try to stay away from eastern European woman, but seen her pictures and at 70 per half hour thought why not. Coms were good. Given flat number and door entry codes,bloody nightmare to find. Met at door by a very attractive fit lady.Thought she my be older than the stated 29 but obviously looks after herself. Big false blobs, but not the worst job I've seen.
On to bed kissing and feeling, then on to some good owo, had to stop her as I was wanting a ride. She jumped on top, cow girl, then reverse, nice view of her toned ass. Came, was cleaned up. She was chatty and funny.  She lives down south but was touring. All in all not a bad half hour.
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There you go op, a free grammar and punctuation lesson, since the colleges are shut due to covid.
FYI, English is not my first language either.