I'm not going to go into all the finer details . . .
Just echoing the other comments. Your other 2 reviews clearly demonstrate you know what a more comprehensive review looks like - venue, comms, girls, services etc. Some are interested in contenders for the bad sex awards, but for many all we want to know if the girls delivers what she claims, or at least have an indfication of what is on offer, was it safe (given VIP's reputation) etc.