Great Review. Went through all the emotions, highs, lows, will he get the girl, won't he, nice build up with tension and some bonding builds up with the protagonists, and of course a traditionally resolved happy ending to it all. Phew ... and maybe use a catchy title like... erm. "Gone in 60 minutes"
My only advice would be next time to add some villains for contrast. Perhaps an overbearing bearded hotelier or a dastardly fellow guest who tries to steal the girl's heart only to break it.
But seriously... great review and I am now for the first time ever considering getting a hotel room. Any tips?