My guess would be that the reviewers first language isn't English. If so it's a decent effort - at least he has provided a review which is more than some do.
Yes, fair play to the OP. I'm pretty sure this was a barebones review when I first saw it but he's now improved it to an acceptable standard so good job george21.
It's very poor that she only did OW, OWO is usually standard and included in the price. So is FK as well. Of course, it's always at the girl's discretion (as it should be) but if there's any fault with the punter (e.g. cleanliness) then he should be told so and if need be refuse to see him and give a refund. There's no excuse to take their money and provide a poor service - it's totally unacceptable.